rate_review Reviews

No!!!!! Not a sad one!!!!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

In one word....BRILLIANT!

There were no loose ends no what if's? and no hanging ending! This is the best one shot I have ever read for any ship! I truly beleive Snape is a good guy and deep down under his stiff gruff exterior there is a normal human being with human emotiions. You wrote this really really well! Now can you write a story where all the good guys survive and all the bastards get vapourised into the deepest pits of hell?....LOL I like fluff and romance!

that was...wonderful. amazing. incredibly well written and moving. all of that in one chapter.
very original and clever idea about the maMA and how they used both non-magical and magical things together. pretty ingenius, i'd say.
i wish you had put more detail into the first 'comfort' sex between HG/SS but as this was a deeper story and not just a one shot it's fitting.
poor severus. at least he had a chance to experience love.
i enjoyed this story so much and i do hope there'll be more to come from you, seeing as you're a very talented writer.
-cara

Beautiful story...
I can say no more,
No word can describe how touching this is...

This is really heartbreaking...
You're a woderful writer, but the end is so emotional!
Keep writing more stories please, you're fantastic!!