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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh i am SO EXCITED!!!! i cant wait to see how hermione takes this turn of events and he is so lost to her in every way, it is so sweet and romantic. well i really-really enjoyed that chapter. basicly everything even the verb cruelty and the momentary fear of lucius thinking he had lost her. :) well do update soon-i am just so................well everything, i guess. ;)
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Otto found the problem with the carriage. And I love how Hermione read Lucius the riot act. It was cute. I'm enjoying thier interactions immensely.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew hoo
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@31..awesome update!!!
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Please add more soon!
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It looks like Hermione was able to hold her own against those vicious Purebloods. I always thought she had that kind of strength. Well done to Hermione. She's becoming as cunning as Lucius I think. The end part of the chapter was so sweet, makes me want to wipe a tear from my eye. You're doing really well showing the emotions between Lucius and Hermione.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My favorite line of dialogue from this chapter: "What, you married a woman?" Funny.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again I am enthralled. Somehow you unwittingly captured an evening best remembered with a few cocktails. I wish I had had the stones Hermione does. Thanks for giving me an alternative ending.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed and laughed about the toaster incident. It was truly classic. Very good chapter.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is Lucius related to Monk? I'm actually with him on the whole greasy/dirty hands thing. I enjoyed it.