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schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the last two chapters very much. My dislike of Pansy aside, I was glad to see Draco, and I thought Lucius and Hermione gave a very good performance at the dinner thus far.

Can't wait to find out what the rest of the dinner-dance brings; I half expect Hermione to lose her cool or hex someone into next week.
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how Draco is smart enough to catch on that Hermione is the key to his father's happiness, and thus his financial happiness. I am glad that Lucius is enamoured enough with his wife that he is going out of his way to make her socially acceptable to his friends, and I use that term loosly, even though she doesn't seem to care. Great chapter.
person Bri-Ana
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! wanted to read all the chapters before i put in a review for you. Liking the story..liking (wanting?) Lucius more ;-) Hoping to see a bit more Draco, a bit less of Pansy with him. Looking forward the the next chapter. Don't have any real complaints about the story so keep up the great writing..oh and how much longer before Hermione gives in and goes the manor...i can understand her reasons for not going there yet, but as a mom who gave birth to twins in April, i would want all the luxurious spoiling i could get, but thats just me.

Happy Writing!!!
Bri
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Please add more
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter the way you have brought in the purebloods attitude is brilliant looking forward to the next update
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter, my dear. i'm
pleased to see that neither of them are
blind enough to believe that this little
bit of information will be enough to gain
Hermione a foot on the rocky ground of the
upper class's social groupings.

hopefully, Lucius can find something in that
oily, Slytherin brain of his to do just that.

i'll anxiously be awaiting the next chapter,
my dear. good show.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOHHH!! This is going to bee a difficult project for Lucius!! But i'm so happy that Draco could see is father was happy and that he respects Lucius tidbit! Maybe he will help??Great story. More please.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope that Hermione will accept the central heating ang move into the manor soon. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.

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