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Thanks for the realistic description of horomone swings. Your words ring true.

well he cant fool her about the nightgown. hehe. silly man. well thanks for the confersation, well you be showing us the, well writing that part with madam malkin? now you have me worried about the dance and what are going to conspirers do. i do hope that there is another chapter coming soon! lucius better be true to his word and NOT leave her at all that night. do HURRY!! :)

(Regarding the mystery)

So, one perpetrator is definitely male, the other is unspecified as of yet, giving me the impression that 'it' is female.

The unspecified person has been intercepting supplies meant for Azkaban and the ministry - mostly containing loo roll and other basic hygiene items.
> Who would want to purchase these items?
> I'd mostly be looking at hotels, other large companies with a high staff number.
> Perhaps saint mungo's is buying it - have any characters thought to check there?
> is Hogwarts on the receiving end of the supplies?

The thefts have been subtle, and nobody has noticed what they'd got until it was gone, suggesting the theft has been occurring over quite a while.

The villains still want Hermione dead, and are aware that Lucius also has his mind on the problem, and they now want him dead too; so, whatever they are doing is either (a) extremely dangerous or (b) going to be damaging to the wizarding world... so they don't want them to talk about it.

The villains are aware of the charity ball, as Hermione and Lucius have both pointed out, it is preliminary a pureblood 'thing', and rich members of the society at that... and the villains intend on going to the party to kill all three Malfoys... so, that suggests that they themselves are pureblood, but not in such a affluent position as the others.

They know Hermione is pregnant, but she doesn't tend to move into the wizarding world from her muggle home. Few people know she is pregnant, so, whom are they getting their information about the pregancy from? Which leads me back to saint Mungos, they'd be able to check the records if they were doing naughty deals with them... unless the villain I think of as female is actually Hermione's mediwitch or one of the nurses.

hmmm.....

10/10

Holy Hanaha! The plot thickens. Please add more!

great chapter...i like how lucius goes about getting his way and hermione makes it known to hiim that she is angry...of course, she still gives into him, but who wouldn't???

definitely loved this chapter - naughty Lucius!

I can't wait for the dinner dance just to see what happens when all those posh wizards meet Hermione. Ooh and will we finally find out who's behind all this!

next one soon please!

brilliant chapter just love this story

Oh my GOD, that was bliss. Gorgeous, sensual, hot, delicious...*runs off to find thesaurus*.

I want to see Lucius smile his 'slightly vulpine' smile. I loved his Lord of the Manor schtick when he was persuading (er, commanding) Hermione to go to the ball. And the whole possessive thing...thinking his fellow Slytherins are going to obsess over her hair LOL.

Wonderful lemon, need I add? And you're doing a Ball scene next! I know I'm going to be drowning in your opulent prose and I'm getting my aqualung sorted NOW. Simply divine, my dear.

I like it. Please update soon.

I really love your story. The plot is wonderful with its twists and lemons galore. I love this pairing so much more because of your story. Your writing is very captivating and I just couldn't get enough of it. I hope you update soon ^_^