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schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEHE! I was so excited to see the update...though I wonder if I really should torture myself as hubby will be in Iraq until Dec 08....oh well, couldnt resist!! ****Sending naughty inspiration your way*****
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that you will soon reveal who is trying to do away with Lucius and Hermione. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job girl! Loved this chapter, especially the smut. Can't really do with out it. Please add more soon
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice break from all the marital tension. LOL.
person Janeplay
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love it!!!! It's sooo funny! Lucius really just can't manage without her, can he? Well done and Encore!!!
person blue artemis
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius as a houseboy? Only as decoration. I don't believe any housework would be done. Anyway, he would be great as a bedwarmer. A good chapter.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was priceless! Lucius in marigolds (washing-up gloves) - what an image! Though I think he was perfectly justified in throwing a strop over the frilly apron.

Laughed out loud at his toast-making technique - poor boy, he really can't *bear* to lose face, can he? So characteristic that everything has to be done perfectly, right down to the shape of the pancakes. (Minor Britpick - it's very unusual to have pancakes for breakfast over here - or indeed for any occasion other than Shrove Tuesday. For no good reason - I think we should eat them more. Yummy.)

I like your justification of the suspense - of course, it's NOT suspense! Just...mild edgy anticipation. LOL. That'll come up in a film trailer one day.

Great - more of this, please.
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the toaster scene. I had a good laugh. Update soon.

Lady Serpentina
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story. Continue the good work.

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