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person ShilohDarke
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I definitely enjoyed the way that Hermione was stunned speechless at her husband's endowments! There isn't much that can make her speechless... Of course, we all know this! But, I truly loved it anyway! I hope he treasures the fact that he was her first. I also hope it makes his affection and possessiveness that much stronger... (I know he's already half lost to her, even if he doesn't realize it yet!

Write more! Shiloh
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You evil woman you!!! Because of you, my computer screen fogged up. I demand that you do it again. Great chapter and you are doing a wonderful job. Please keep up that good work and update soon....I can't wait to read more!!!!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely. though if i remember correctly virgins require a bit more...um...stimulation to help with the initial pain. though it was a while ago i might be mistaken.

other than that sweet. i cant wait till harry gets all grrrr at who threw her in there. cause harry will get grrr and ron will get grrr and someone will go BOOM. lol

cant wait till the next chapter. :0)
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait for you to add another chapter. You know just how to keep your audience on edge. You have such a fluent way with words that I'm actually jealous. Try as I might my story isn't as beautifully articulated as yours. It's like comparing the diary of Anne Frank to The Cat in the Hat. I feel so undeserving to be in the presence of your stories...but I love them anyway.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Down girl,down. Hermione I know how you must feel but try and control yourself.
That chapter was oh so yummy. I think Lucius has got his hands full. I love the way you described Lucius "manhood". I must say it made my mouth water. I love it! Well done!
person Korrigan
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY good!keep it up!oh my god Lucius and Hermione's wedding night Damn!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew hoo! A smut interlude! And no one writes them like you LaBib!

I love how you dedicate almost two whole pages of yummy descriptive prose to Lucius
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody brilliant! The mental image of Lucius walking towards Hermione fresh from the shower will stay with me for a long time - he is just too gorgeous! Hermione is a very lucky girl! hope there's some good morning sex - I'm addicted to the hotness!

Can't wait to see what Harry and Ron are going to make of the marriage.

PS thanks for the drool rag - SO needed that.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too long to wait! More, hurry!
person wicraven
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

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