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person maddie50
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this so much, and knowing you wrote this a while ago, I thought I would write a review after a few chapters. The tale has an interesting premise, it is certainly believable that Hermione could garner enemies from those in power. As for what is happening in the cell, I love "hearing" what is going on inside their heads. Hermione: how to survive intact being her goal; observing, cataloging observations and comparing with her own knowledge, making theories, re-evaluating previous impressions, and burgeoning desire. Lucius: how to utilize Hermione to his advantage; observing, assessing, calculating, testing, provoking and evaluating her response, questioning, cataloging observations and facts, re-evaluating previous impressions, plan for seduction, plan for protection, plan for escape. Lucius's performance of calisthenics while baring his chest was certainly an excellent plan, and for the reader and absolute hoot. How could any female resist that image? I can imagine Hermione looking like a deer in the headlights while that was taking place. It is difficult to admit Lucius's arrogance is for damn good reasons. BTW I love the pictures you have posted on LJ. Jean aka maddie50
person maddie50
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, we have a clueless Warden. Perhaps he can regain control of his guards, or maybe not. If the two worst end up getting fired I can see some revenge being planned against Lucius and Hermione. Being allowed to marry should certainly help their sanity, hopefully keep Hermione safe, and be lots of fun. The shower scene was very amusing. I am still chuckling. Hermione's fascination of Lucius's maleness is certainly typical. Perhaps she could have been a little more covert about her observations, but it (in general) really is a fascinating organ. Their coupling was just right for their first time. Lucius knows that although he is being pushed beyond his limits of control, he must make this a good experience for Hermione or their future sex life will suffer.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your style to write. I usually get tired of reading so long stories because I
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I've just worked my way thru your story and loved it immensely!!!
I apologise as it is my custom to wait until i finish a story to review... Or if I find our it not finished then I will review. I hope your muse gets fat and happy from all the reviews you receive and may writers block that evil bitch never last long. Oh and tell Draco to find his way to my bed...
LOVE!!!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i realllllly loved this story and i look forward to reading your others! so well written! a rival to JK herself! well done! loveddd it! x
person luvhp
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merlin's Beard! This is such a wonderful story, and very wodry :) My 14 yr old told me once that if you don't know at least 7 words on the page then it is above your reading level, I'm ashamed to say your story blew my dictionary up, LOL.
Anyway. I enjoyed reading this lovely story. I would see the updates on yahoo but I have decided to only read one shots and completed stories since most authors don't seem to finish and leave us hanging years later for an ending. (I will finish mine, just in a funk right now) so, when I finally read that you had finished I was enthralled and eagerly jumped in as soon as possible.
The mystery of it all was very intirguing and the smut, well, what else are we here for if not reading smutlets! :) And you did such a wonderful job on those as well.
I absolutely love your stories.
Off to check out your Lucius/OFC story, I had been undecided as to whether or not I wanted to read something without Hermione, but will definately check it out!!
person luvhp
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I completely forgot to add...

I was waiting on baited breath each chapter for them to say "I LOVE YOU"
Way to end the story!

APPLAUD!
person Diane
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear LaBibliographe,

Prisoners of Love-A Mystery is probably one of, if not the best Lucius/Hermione pairing fanfic I've ever read. It is also one of the best fanfics (Harry Potter or not) I have ever read and I am a tried and true Lucius/Hermione shipper and Harry Potter fan. You did a great job. I hope you continue writing, because you have a real gift for it. Thanks for writing such a fantastic story. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
person sayyida
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione should have included the descriptions
person Sweetie
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous. I tuned in super late so i just wanted to say the part about shellacking the pancake for posterity made me laugh... among other things that is. I'm so torn now, i'm suppose to be in love with Severus, but now that Lucius has come along, I just don't know who I want anymore. Decisions Decisions. I blame and thank you for my new found love. Consider me subscribed.

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