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person dragon37
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, what a place to stop. I don't think I could ever stop Lucius from kissing me, and grinding against me, no matter who was coming into the cell. I would have to finish first, business second. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
person katie
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapters hope to see your review soon.......I watch for ti every day
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy I'm really starting to slack on reviewing. *Bad reviewer* Maybe I should be tossed in prison with Lucius. :) Ok no more jello shots tonight my mind is corrupt enough. LOL I can't wait to read what happens when her friends finally figure out where Hermione is. The sexual tension is so thick in that cell you could cut it with a knife. I can't wait till it explodes and they finally give in to there desires. :)
person MaryAnn
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's really weird, i didn't think i had a thing with prisons but i read your Lucius and the waif and i loved it to pieces, now Prisoners of Love...and i find myself doing searches on Azkaban and Lucius...? WTF? Your fault!!! :)
Ha, i love your stories and i love this new one, and i guess there's just something about that tied together on a rock-concept (wether it be prison, MarriageLaw, strange new worlds or whatever else) that i adore (pressure building most likely:)) Thank you so much for another great story!
person Dreamy_Dragon
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing mystery. I like the way Hermione and Lucius are slowly discovering that they are having more in common than they ever thought. And that kiss was just... *fans self*. I wonder what will happen when they finally give in to their desires. And I hope they come up with a nice little revenge plot for those who sent them to Azkaban. Looking forward to reading more.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter however can't wait till it gets to the serious stuff. Looking forward to when Snape comes for a visit, see what happens there.
person :)
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! its great! I cant wait to see Severus, Ron, Harry (and maybe even GInny) appear! I do think you shouldn't make Lucius too intend on ' seducing Hermione with his body' . That concept seems kinda wrong somehow :) Love it! Keep on the good work!
person olivia
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, very well written. keep it up
person ShilohDarke
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I owe you an apology. I read Ch 6 the day after you put it up with just minutes to spare til I had to run off to work, So I sqwelched on leaving you a review. I am sorry. I'll make up for that now...

MAN!!! That was one hell of a kiss. It made me want to stay home and take advantage of my hubby... Needless to say, with no time to review, I certainly had no time to do anything that adventurous either! DAMN!

Ch 7 was wonderful as well. I really wished that the two of them would just hush and give in to what they both wanted to do! I mean, ARGH!!! At least let them have a little more foreplay next chapter... My mouth is watering for it!

WRITE MORE SOON!!! Shiloh
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The way you represent both Lucius and Hermione is spot on. I can't wait for chapter 8! (ha, I rhymed lol)

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