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Excellent story so far! I am really enjoying how you are building the relationship slowly, as it should be. I really don't like it when writers just throw them together and somehow they "magically" forget their past and fall immediately in love! Your story is the first in a long time to grab my attention and hold it. You have marvelous attention to detail, as I can really see and feel what's happening.

BTW, for some reason, the line about the "post-coital smoke"... why did I just hear Jason Isaac's voice absolutely rolling deliciously over that one?!?!

Great job!! Can't wait for the next chapters and a thank you for what I know is hard work getting it just right!

I'm glad this is going on. Thanks for the update notification.

Hello dearest, finally have been connected back with the world and see you've posted a new story..it'a absolutely fantastic, I can't wait for more. Lucius is scheming and charming as usual. I want to see how the plot unfolds. Ophelia

i really really really like this so far! it's so unique and different! i love their characters and of course...Lucius couldn't be better! i can't wait until the next chapter so please update soon!! :)

You can delete this if you like dear. Check your email... there's a surprise waiting for you there! :)

Chapter 3: The plot thickens! Selling Ministry secrets to Muggles... sounds like a load of codswallop to me.

Their delicate relationship is quite interesting; every movement and decision they make seems to be some kind of struggle for power.

Hermione is indebted to Lucius now. He saved her from a rather nasty experience from the guards; she owes him. What? I can only imagine.

Love your stories!

P.S. I'm happy to hear that Snape will be making an appearence.

I would like to read about what happened to Hermione with the guards.
What they thought of her new 'improved' body. I'm glad Lucius got a reaction while
doing his magic on Hermione, he getting hot by Mione.
Sometimes he makes me laugh. Hermione's a woman afterall. Dirty bloody or not.
Update soon. I really had fun reading Luciu's discomfort moment. Sorry if you see any
mistakes. I'm reviewing as fast as I can. I'm off to work.

MP87

I like it so far keep it up :)

Yay! Another Chapter! Good one too. At least the guards didn't rough her up much more than they did. Something tells me it could have been a lot worse. I look forward to the progression of this story.

Great Job!

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks