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person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for updating.
Happy fourth of July, if your in the states. Update soon. One thing I love about your
Hermiones' is that she always fights Lucius back, no matter what.

MP87
person ForgetfulLove
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh! I like this story! I have never ever been a fan of Lucuis/Hermione, but for some reason today, I decided to venture into this ship's catagory and I'm glad I did. You make this ship fun to read, though, I can't wait for it to get to the more smutty parts. I also like how the plot is unfolding so far. 5/5
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Clever old Lucius, disguising his orbs as hair - that's pretty cool. I like the way they start right in with the bitching.

Poor Hermione with the bucket - I like the way Lucius handles the situation though, in his usual lordly way. Really, he's doing her a favour.

Sleeping in the nip is a perversion in her book then? My, my, it's going to be a long hard road...

So Lucius is going to disfigure her so the guards won't want her - how Slytherin! I like it. But Hermione is getting pretty close to his real motives too...

This is going to be a real sparring match; the sexual tension is already hanging heavy in the stale dungeon air.

And Snape is the Headmaster; how interesting... Is he going to be making an appearance? (pretty please).
person Regina
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, please! I just *love* all of your stories! "Prisoners of Love" is yet another great tale! +++++!
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Surfmistress
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He seemed a bit surprised that Hermione figured out his game plan so quickly. Poor Lucius, 'trapped' in a small cell with a first-class mind wrapped in a young, pretty, feminine package How soon will it dawn on him he might just have met his match ;-)
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intereting beginning! Please keep writing!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is definitely an interesting start. I can't wait to see what happens next. Who is that talking at the end? I certainly hope it isn't anyone Hermione loves and trusts....? Once again, you are weaving a tail I am sure I won't be able to get enough of.

I don't think Lucius will have much of a problem falling for Granger. Once he begins to see what a sly mind she has, he'll be hooked!

Shiloh
person Extraho
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this. im waiting eagerly for more
person Dee Dee
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most interesting story ideas I have seen in some time.

If they sent Hermione to prison so fast, do her friends and colleagues know? If they don

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