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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. The grammar was horrible, but I managed.
The first paragraph, I think, can express the emotion of
the scene, the need, desperation, but after that, I suggest
spell check in the first degree. But I love nearly anything
Ron/Draco. It's nice to see a story that isn't so focussed
on the physical aspect, parsay, and is tuned in to the emotion
of the characters. I enjoyed the story.
IMP
The first paragraph, I think, can express the emotion of
the scene, the need, desperation, but after that, I suggest
spell check in the first degree. But I love nearly anything
Ron/Draco. It's nice to see a story that isn't so focussed
on the physical aspect, parsay, and is tuned in to the emotion
of the characters. I enjoyed the story.
IMP