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for Love, Lust and Jealousy

by Joey

schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story.
person beauty7890102
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah great story so far can't wait for more so please update agian and soon.
person bluezy
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is a good start, and I know you didn't do it on purpose but please, fix the title? Jealousy is the proper way of spelling the word.


Luckily it is the only thing that is grating my nerves, I have to say I really loved the story, this far. PLEASE, I implore thee, update and make sure we are not left on our hunger?
person toads70
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's it? i thought by the really short first chapter that you would rewrite it and make it a decent length, the second chapter shouldn't even be there yet,, the first one isn't finished!
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your updates are too short. At least give us a page per update. >_< The last one wasn't even a paragraph.
person you suck
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAY! Pity cutters! Boo hoo. If only all of them would cut deep enough... sigh! That's only in a perfect world. Next time post something with a littlemore substance (cutting is over played and stupid, Harry's not a cutter, Ginny maybe, not Harry).
person toads70
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start, update soon!!
person luvhp
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hhmmm, don't like the cutting bit (bit personal, my 13 yr old did it)

interested in seeing how the story turns out though.

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