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April 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I loved the ending.
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! It's been a long time since I've seen a story so short and at the same time so complex, full of humor, with real-like characters and a devious plot. Short but witty dialogs, sharp tongue and oh, how I wish I've seen it a lot sooner, but better late than never. It was a real delight and I hope that somewhere there are more gems like this one.
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderfully funny. I hope you continue it!
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story - i have read it a few times now and I find it enjoyable each time.
Great work.
Great work.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"...un-focus your eyes..." What a hoot. I loved it!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why I JUST NOW found this--it's bloody fantastic. "Winning felt good." *snort* You should revive it sometime. Don't get me wrong, it's fantastic as a stand-alone, but it could get really, really interesting if you drew it out some.
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gloriously funny! I love all the details of the various suitors/duelers for Hermione's hand in marriage. The flirting from all involved was fantastic.
I especially enjoyed how Professor Snape was affected by Hermione's blushing and his feasting his eyes upon her bosom, and his feeling like a teenager with the resultant tightening of his trousers.
;~D
Brilliantly written!
Well done--keep up the good work!
I especially enjoyed how Professor Snape was affected by Hermione's blushing and his feasting his eyes upon her bosom, and his feeling like a teenager with the resultant tightening of his trousers.
;~D
Brilliantly written!
Well done--keep up the good work!
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.... you so have to add to this eventually. Loved it- made me laugh. Benny needs to hook-up with Luna perhaps. Lol, great job on this!
~~juls
~~juls
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you were going to add more to this story or not?at least an epilogue? it is nifty
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was rich!!! So funny!!! Loved it!!! Please write more soon!!!!