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for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

by Ms_Figg

person Julls
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you will feel better soon! I can't wait to see what will hapen with Hermione et Severus.
This new character should be Rod's father.
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Julia: Not a bad idea really, but he's been in Azkaban too long to be his father. Rod's about 18.
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What I find so fascinating, and equally frustrating, is that the story is on Chapter 50, and those two STILL have yet to have sex! Haha! The tension can be cut with a knife. When they finally jump in bed together, I'll bet they fuck like bunnies. I crack up everytime she gets scared of his "huge tool." And thank you for writing for such an original fic. Looking forward to your next update. :)
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am speechless! Here, I thought that this story might have been getting close to being finished, and now you've gona and added a brand new log on the fire, so I can only imagine that this will be probably another ten chapters... AT least!

Love it! Shiloh
person Julls
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't thought about the fact that Rod should be 17 or 18 and Jugson has been in prizon for 22 years. I also don't feel very good and I have just understood that I have no job anymore. I am realy distracted these days. Sorry!
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Julia: It's no problem. I do that all the time but usually manage to catch it before I actually post. It happened this chapter actually. I originally had the character as Dolohov, but realized he'd done far too much to only get 22 years. Plus, he'd already escaped the prison once. There's no way he'd ever be let out of Azkaban. So I had to change the character. If you're up on your HP knowledge, the bit of description for Jugson is the same as Dolohov, having a twisted face. lol. I could have changed it but figured, heck, more than one Death Eater has a twisted face. lol. But I did think your idea was a good one still. I probably wouldn't have done it myself even if I did think of it, because 1) it would have been too horrible for Rod and 2) It would have been hell to make it feasible for him to even find out about his father, unless Jugson knew all along. It could have been pulled off if Jugson wasn't immediately brought to justice. But that's a plot twist that just didn't happen this time. You have nothing to be sorry about at all, and I hope you feel better. I'm out of it myself, girl.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
roh roh! big cliffie there! Cannot wait to read more.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes! A new villain! As much as it interests me, I can't wait for more Snape/Hermione! The next chapter is going to be good. =]
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you feel better soon.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, interesting. :)

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