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February 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this really great story and would appreciate notice of updates. This last chapter though needs considerable sorting out. It does not respond well to having the text size increased. The text font cjanges haphazardly. Some paragraphs are three screens wide (Really annoying). In other chapters the lines of text are just a narrow band on the left side of the screen and the reader cannot do anything to rectify it. The spaces between paragraphs are ridiculously huge all through the story. I don't know if any of this is your fault or something to do with uploading, but you need to resolve it.
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October 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Formatting issues
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October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious as to why there is html formatting in the story, it's really making it hard for me to enjoy the story. I'm using Firefox, if that helps.
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i am interested in this story but the editing makes it unreadable do you have a better version?
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Can't wait for more..
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good start I bet snake face is happy with his gay fuckers and his dog whores
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can you tell me were to find the original story by Wim Vincken
i love this one and if the original is even half like yours i would like to read it
you can reach me at jullekecesar@hotmail.com or jullekecesar@gmail.com
thanks you
i love this one and if the original is even half like yours i would like to read it
you can reach me at jullekecesar@hotmail.com or jullekecesar@gmail.com
thanks you
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The bottom half of Chapter 21 here is a "wall of text" that is VERY hard to read. I don't know what screwed up the formatting, but could you please try to fix it?
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you had me laughing so hard i almost pissed myself.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you sir deserve a dollar for both chapter 4 and 5.