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for Patent Leather Mini Skirt

by graballz

person QueenB
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 I don't know anything about Luna (haven't read any of the HP novels except book 1) but the little I've gathered makes her out to be spacy as an alien craft and nuttier than a fruitcake. That doesn't necessarily translate to a bad dress sense but it works for the purposes of your story.

But, honestly, I was thinking of Draco in a hot black leather mini and now I have to imagine him in blue and orange (which is like wearing red and green or yellow and purple). (shudders)
person QueenB
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 I was happy for the sex and the knowledge that Draco didn't really need his disguise. He was just too insecure to go in without it. I'm also wondering who it was that was watching him. Luna's eyes are close to Draco's in color (that's one reason she thought the charade would work) so the brown eyes must have belonged to someone else.
person ZooArmy
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shite! You really updated, I'm still too stunned to believe it *suspicious me*
THANK YOU!!! I was really afraid that you had abandoned it. *happy sigh*

Didn't take Draco the necklace off? And later while sex he wears it again. Just wondered.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO, complete complete!!! :D
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHERE IS THE REST?!!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!
person ZooArmy
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eurm, Update? Maybe? I'm so curious about the end of this. PLEASE!
person ZooArmy
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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PUPPY EYES!
Does my persistence help?
person KCRae
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i NEED chapter three. I mean really, really NEED it. I can't wait, I'm all a flutter...whoa. :D
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That wasw a tease you little tease.
I demand more. Erm, *looks around* please.

X O X O dash Nicole
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 3! This plan may just backfire! Must have more!

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