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for Custody Battle

by CryingCinderella

person jaime
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... very interting. You have another loyal reader in me now... well done!~
person Sampdoria
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. I assume the third chapter is a vission of the past? I look forward to read more of your story!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udate soon.
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww that was sweet of mione ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Patriot1
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was great and i can't wait to find out how severus reacts to the news of who his daughter's mother is.
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad so far
person ccino49
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now this sounds interesting. I hope you're quick at updates because I want to know what happens next. I take it the tinkling glass came from Snape's direction when he heard her name called. He He. I'm eager to find out his reaction to finding out he has a daughter. Does the girl know who her farther is?
ccino
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person ccino49
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo. To be a fly on the wall when that coversation took place. Hee Hee. Typical Snape, blaming others rather than himself and denying all knowledge of her. I tak it Hermione will be called in soon, the anticipation of that confontation has me on the edge of my seat. LOL.
ccino
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story Please update soon,

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