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for New Beginnings

by MisstressNicole

schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, the ending was just too cheezy, too too cheezy. It was cute though.
person Crio (not logged in)
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww yey that was so cute :D *applause*
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!
person Sheree
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Draco finally saw how he was being and changed but why did he have to change everything about himself? Was that the only reason Harry loved him was because he thought he needed to change? And what about Ron and Hermoine? You said they were always glaring at him so why should he also have to kiss their behinds? Doesn't seem right to expect him to do all the changing considering he was that way when Harry supposedly fall in love with him.
person pepper
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey :-)
reeeally sweet story, i like it, but you should go through the spelling and grammar again, there are a lot of mistakes still.
but still the story is quite good.

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