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November 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha i wondered why these last few chapters where so familiar until it clicked that you have up to 28 and fanfiction.com :D
Loving this story cant wait for the new chapter 29! :D
Loving this story cant wait for the new chapter 29! :D
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November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
kudos! keep the chapters coming, you are a great story teller.
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November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey
absolutely loved the chapters
please keep updating
cullengal101
absolutely loved the chapters
please keep updating
cullengal101
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November 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
just started reading this 2day an just couldn't stop love the way ur putting every1 and everything 2gether I always disliked Dumbledore cause of throwing the kids into situations that even most adults couldn't handle but that being said jk rowling really did pull it off with pizzazz ;)
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November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-23: Good story but a lot of characters moving around. Not sure if I like Lucius as Headmaster but I like Lucius a lot except for Fawles on his shoulder...that seems kind of weird to me...but then I'm a muggle so what do I know.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I knew to expect OOC-ness, but wasn't expecting your characters to be so absurdly so. It was almost comical to see Snape swoon over a little boy like Harry. It was even more odd to see Draco throw a childish tantrum, and then for everyone to whine about their feelings for a bit. The icing on the cake was the 'childishly bratty' persona you gave Harry.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! Cant wait to read what happens next :D
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Um... Just read chapter one and thought you might want to add OOC to your summary. It will help you get the right target audience. Without more character development I don't like extremely OOC Harry or severus but it was an interesting plot idea. Just a heads up about the summary :)
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, it is an enjoyable read.
I am surprised that Harry seems to have forgotten so quickly that Hemione was calling him names just a little while ago and that she was paid to spy on him.
I am surprised that Harry seems to have forgotten so quickly that Hemione was calling him names just a little while ago and that she was paid to spy on him.
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really love it