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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is absolutely beautiful. though i was sad that you decided to trade ginny's life for fred's, you've done it honorably and done her justice. i like that you haven't written off what she and harry shared just to justify his future with snape. well done. this story feels like a realistic continuation of book seven. in fact, i like it a bit more since DH had a too-quickly-wrapped-up-happily-ever-after feel to it that didn't sit well with me. i've really enjoyed the characterization in this. i feel as though you've been fair to all the characters and i so look forward to reading more.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Poor Harry!
I'm looking forward to Severus telling him to snap the hell out of it in his usual manner. ;)
We're a regular mutual appreciation society, aren't we! LOL
I'm looking forward to Severus telling him to snap the hell out of it in his usual manner. ;)
We're a regular mutual appreciation society, aren't we! LOL
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter as well T.T
Seeing Harry like that is so sad, and the way you showed us his nightmare really made me shiver. Ron's reaction when Harry mentionned Ginny dying because of him was so awesome too, and even if I don't particulary love him, I found that it really suited him, he was being both a great brother and friend at the same time... and I loved Charlie and Kreacher for trying to cheer Harry up that way.
I can't wait for next chapter~~! (and by the way... yayyy for Harry's new Potions skills to show them off to Snape!!)
Seeing Harry like that is so sad, and the way you showed us his nightmare really made me shiver. Ron's reaction when Harry mentionned Ginny dying because of him was so awesome too, and even if I don't particulary love him, I found that it really suited him, he was being both a great brother and friend at the same time... and I loved Charlie and Kreacher for trying to cheer Harry up that way.
I can't wait for next chapter~~! (and by the way... yayyy for Harry's new Potions skills to show them off to Snape!!)
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Usually I hate AUs, but I have to be honest and say that this is really *really* good. What you've changed you've handled well. It's interesting to see how Harry is dealing with the aftermath. I can't wait for more.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're always welcome! I love to feed fellow authors! And this continues to be great. Poor Harry!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughing* Poor Harry, I can't wait till Severus comes into the picture. I wonder how he'd (Severus) would be treated if he tried to walk down the street as Harry just did.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey hun sorry must have missed the last update. I understand completely your thinking on the remus issue. I can just see all the marauder's pranking the death eaters. lol. Anyway this is a bloody good story and i think you handled Harry n the shopping catastrophe really well. You put across a good sense of urgency and proper indignation over what was happening to him. Love it and cant wait for more.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until Harry and Severus will meet again.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't reviewed you here yet, and I really should have done it : this fanfiction - is - great. As I told you, the way you write it is very personnal, it remains yours and indecently good, but Harry's feelings and attitude really are *his*, and so are the other characters', which is sooo rare in fanfictions. And I couldn't imagine the scene in Diagon Alley in any other way: it's just perfect, and people are freaks v.v Harry making some mother understands her behavior was just worst than her child's was excellent!! He's so embarrassed and yet annoyed, trying to make people realize they're being rude without hurting them and then being unable to stand it anymore and going back in a rush, it's totally him! You're doing great here, and even if I haven't finished the 7th book yet -still traumatized by Hedwig's death T.T- I can't help but love this!! And... I can just thank you a looot for updating so so so regulary T.T You're my god~
*cheerleader mode* Go, go, go~~ Rei-nii!! ^o^
*cheerleader mode* Go, go, go~~ Rei-nii!! ^o^
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT! I hope you do more soon. And while Remus dying made me sad, too (as I love his scruffy self), I'm glad you brought back Fred. That's someone who just NEEDS to be around!