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for Practice Makes Perfect

by Inell

schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow an actually plausible first time!
please write more! I really loved this
person missocki
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. And very true to the characters, which in many stories with smut, doesn't always occur. Well done.

Giggle.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! How cute!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delicious shower scene. Hermione and Ron both seemed to be very in-character. Hermione, as a muggleborn, tries to lock the door behind her, and I like that she's actually read a couple of romance novels and had high expectations of her first time.
person luvhp
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute and sexy! Good job :)
person Isake
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YaY!!! Finally realistic first timing! I love Ron/Hermione, and this is great!
person Rosamund
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo sweet of Ron! Should have recognized your writing, Inell ;)

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