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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The textstiles in the story are very iritatting,
but without them it would be a very good story,
althoug I like more if Sevs a dom and Harry a sub,
but youre story is very good telled =)
but without them it would be a very good story,
althoug I like more if Sevs a dom and Harry a sub,
but youre story is very good telled =)
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL I kept forgetting that Harry was not the sub. Sorry it's the only way I can picture him. But you write so well.
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well this is unusual, normally it is the other way around. You did a very very good job portraying this pairing!
Lotsa dirty talk which I love more than anything. all in all this was an excellent story!
Lotsa dirty talk which I love more than anything. all in all this was an excellent story!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fuck that was so hot! *kisses*
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved it and would love you if you wrote more
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hott =3
I love dom severus but i especially love sem sev x3
I love dom severus but i especially love sem sev x3
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My! That was...vulgar. But delightfully so. :) I haven't read much submissive Severus. This was nice. The length of it was good. Not too long, not too short. I liked it.