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for The Beginning Of Something New

by Primal

schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So freakin hot!!! please continue it and update it I love it
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG SO FREAKIN HOT *fangirl scream/nosebleed pass out* PLEASE UPDATE MORE CANT WAIT
person Jan
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope that you decide to continue this story, absolutely love it.

Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

Jan
person Kiiyouko
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I hope you would continue it.
person DarkOkamiYokai
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update the next chapter soon, i really like this story thus far.
person susan lee
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMORE!!!!!!! pleas, pleas, pleas, pleas, pleassssssssssssss!!!!!!
person twinphoenix222
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was very fast paced and could use a good cleaning up and lengthening. It was short and just way too fast. The third chapter especially was particularly awful. A large part of your 'lemon' scene was repeated, so I would definitely check that out!
person DarkOkamiYokai
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story on both FF.net and here. i really like this story and that sex scene was so hot.
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooooove Gakuen Heaven and the first time I saw the show I wanted to read a Harry Potter crossover with it. Happily I found yours :-D I like the story and was wondering if you are going to continue writing it? Nakajima was so evil and HOT in the third chapter . I really want to read more. Please update!
person tina
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'm BEGGING you to finish this story.
Thank you

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