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wow that was hilarious!!!!:)

I just had to say that I'm really enjoying this story. I get really slack about actually reviewing, so don't take it personally. ;) but I had to review to this. Every HP fanfic I've read has involved an OOC Luna. It seems nigh on impossible to do justice to Canon Luna, and much as I love the character enough to still love her OOC, I just had to say this: Congratulations on actually keeping her in canon! I loved that little scene with her and Harry!!!
I also liked Neville with a backbone telling Romilda she wasn't going to walk all over him, and Kingsley putting Blaise's bother on the spot. Tho, I must admit Millie has captured my heart in that small scene you did with her.
*blushes slightly from going overboard in character analysis* I love the premise and plotlines to this story as well. I have always loved marriage-law fics, and this is certainly an interesting take on it. Can't wait to see where your wily mind takes us next...
My only disappointment *sigh* was the lack of Dramione in this chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens after their shower scene. I think they've both managed to shock each other, and I LOVE it!!!

Eagerly awaiting your next installment,
Dassah

GREAT work. Cannot wait to read more!

This is a great story! Keep it up.

I love how you've incoorporated all of the major characters rather than focusing on just one pair, although I can't wait untill Draco and Hermione take the plunge!

You have to update like now! I am just about dead from fits of laughter! PLEASE update!! Soon!

Phew. That made me dizzy. But in a good way. I'm excited with the wedding day! Is it soon?
Update quickly!!

George has a daughter?

Am greatly enjoying the story; your sex scenes are quite good, and you leaven the fluff with slightly darker bits occasionally. I like Neville especially, and am glad Ron is not a complete dork.

Dollars should be pounds or quids, and stumble instead of stubble in the Harry-Pansy interchange.

nonentity- thanks for the comments. i went back and corrected them!

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Lovely! I really enjoyed the way you portrayed Luna. Perfect!!!
Please, please, update soon! I'm waiting for more D/H action *whistles* ;-)