schedule
September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intriuging. I like it so far, you should update soon.
schedule
August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am interested but your format is all wrong. I it all smooshed together without enough double spacing between paragraphs. On aff you have to double or triple indent between paragraphs to make it stick. just sinlge indenting doesn't do anything. So if you want many people to like and read your fic and review then take the time to check your format after posting. Huge endless paragraphs are useless and not fun to read.
otherwise the ideal for this fic is ok.
otherwise the ideal for this fic is ok.
schedule
August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeee*a next chapter definitely needed...i love it!
schedule
August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so hottt!
schedule
August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh sooo need chapter 2! Kind of hard to read with no spacing up otherwise I liked it!
schedule
August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start!! More please!!