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Can't wait for ch 2

English isn't your first language? That's really funny as I am English and your spelling and grammer is better than mine. Keep up the good work!

I really like this so far. I hope you keep updating and going with it. If you don't have a beta I wouldn't mind doing it for you my email is shinji.fukushima@yahoo.com.

There were a few mistakes but they mainly looked like you were typing to fast and accidentally changed the meaning on the word or the pretense. It was good though I will be keeping an eye on it.

This was a very promising first chapter.

Keep up the good work. English may be your second language, but your command of it is alot better than many native English speakers that I know. ^^

for english not being your native language, you wrote rather well... better than some of my friends and relatives who grew up speaking english. Anyway, your story is off to a nice start, I hope you update soon.