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for The Rules of Life

by BlindedHP

schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is going very well and i believe that you should continue it very very soon lol. I like how you have gone out of the norm and made some of the usual "always good, always there, never do wrong" characters like Serious, bad or not apart. or key part, of Harry's life. I will be waiting for the next chapter.
person NJamicus
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like it!
I'm sorry but I'm dying to know what your mother-tongue is) 'cause your works make me think English is. And it's not. Then you're just far more talented then I could imagine))))))))))
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is just a suggestion but with people finding out about who Harry really is maybe fourth year and some how Crouch jnr/fake Moody finds out some how and Harry has to come forward and compete and afterwards goes to Hogwarts.

I would like to say this is amazing you are an excellent writer and I hope you update soon.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
person Makovaso
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, please update soon.
person KisaKitten
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Darn. I clink the link thinking I'm going to get to actually see the rules of life, and finally get this whole thing figured out. And I'm taken to a box. XD

I love your story, and I can definitely see the truth in it. You've actually got the characterization of a an abused child down pat, from the slight mental regression to the responses to certain stimuli, which is absolutely astounding. most abused!Harry fics are...well... despite the situations the characters are in, the personality is more of a neglected than abused. or mistreated.

Most of your characters are, in fact, fairly well in character, which is rather amazing. I have my doubts about vernon and dumbledore, but dumbledore has to be slightly ooc for the fic, and the way he is ooc is entirely believable. and vernon was a plot device. so he doesn't really exist.

Your plot is very interesting and I can't wait to read more! I loved the competition for Hogsmeade school! I've always wondered in the potterverse what happened to the other magic users, because surely the few in hogwarts each year weren't the only ones in all of great Britain.

Can't wait for more, definitely bookmarking and checking this often.
person lonelyone
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Snape is a stronger man than I give him credit for. This is a great story, and I can't wait to see the chapters detailing how the wizarding world discovers 'harry potter'. One would think that a boy such as he would be recognized when walking through the halls of hogwarts.
person chrl268
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, all i can say is wow!! when is this going to be updated?? i really do love this fic!! keep up the good work. This story has great potential, and i'd love to see the ending!! - could you send me an email when you update?? or an email to tell me if you're abandoning this?? thank you
person Hobbit
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just re read this again hoping for more, could you please email me with updates?
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schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great and I hope that you will update it really, really soon. ^_^ I think that Harry should finish his school at the Hogsmeade school. Great work!!

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