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for The Rules of Life

by BlindedHP

person Vex
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've read all 12 chapters in one sitting and all I can think is 'WOW'..
And 'bloody fucking amazing!' xD

Ya, I have a way with words. ;]
Good luck with life and writting.
person kami_no_yami
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fics i've read in a long time. As I hardly ever review as I do not wish to get to invested... you never know when someone will say "sorry about all your kind words of support & help but I just don't feel like it anymore!" it's entirely frustrating. Please continue with your intreguing tale.
person kunitsu
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I kinda pity Sirius here. I'm glad that Minerva is on Harry's side. The decision that Severus is making right now is not totally the best one but it is a good one, I just hope Harry understands soon
person Darkless
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this Sirius is in serious need of counceling (pun intented) and young Harry too. Unfortunately, Harry's case is one of brainwashing/conditioning and it's very hard, if not impossible, to deprogram one so young. He doesn't even know how to think enough for himself to experience an epiphany or other life-changing event that might reach through all the crap he's been raised (since the crib) to believe. It's going to be a long and discouraging road for both Harry and Severus.

Nicely done, not just fanservice smut. Keep up the good work and push the envelope as far as you can. *thumbs up*
person fragonknight01
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 & 12: Well I wasn't too proud of myself knowing what was coming even if you did give us a broad hint. That really was terribly depressing. And now I really would like to see some people get their just rewards...
person sanda
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least Minerva knows now.
person fragonknight01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 & 9
Wow! love the way you got everything sorted for the games and then made a plausable division of awards. It is also interesting how you are combining some of the happenings of the books with this plotline.
person fragonknight01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch10. That was a horrible chapter. I just hate seeing Harry so close to being destroyed; is this part of the Sirius Black is a bad guy stuff?
person Leentjef
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good keep goinng and post soon
bye bye

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