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for When Two Are One

by rachxoxo

person ZooArmy
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess. You want to make us all believe that Draco will sleep with Harry in one bed and we all get edgy for hot-steamy man on man action, but actually the next chapter will start with Draco leaving grimmauld place to get back to malfoy manor. HA! I'm right, huh? I saw through your little devilish plot, didn't i? GO ME! If I'm mistaken and you really let sleep Draco in Harry's bed (with Harry there as well, of course) I will love you forever and a day!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need ch 7!
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now this was ever so great. The story is getting better with every chapter. Your writing is so incredibly intense, it makes me laugh, makes me furious, makes be sad - amazing!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG NOOOO Elf sex with EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw
-gouges out eyes-
i think i might be sick..........
Nice way of trying to get Draco to open up... i wonder what he saw and what he's hiding ...
oh yeah did i mention EW elf spunk!


Update soon
~Ero
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this!! I haven't read much lately cuz of DH... I swear that book messed me up! But I can't wait for an update on this.

And EW! I'm scarred for life!!! House elves having sex??!! That's just plain wrong.... **shuder**

Oh and btw... I caught the beetlejuice reference in chapter four. I was totally ROTFLMAO!!!! I loved it!

Great job and keep up the awesome work!!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I sooo didn't need to know about house elf sex! Though I would like chapter 6!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eeeww omg the elves blah but funny. want more!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far. I think angst is a good thing but I hope it doesn't last too long. And ewwww house elf sex. Update soon
person Extraho
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, and realistic- just a bonus as its actually fiction,. daisy and kreatcher= yuch
person ZooArmy
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, thank you so much you didn't go in too much detail with the elf-sex. *shudders* Why did you write about elf sex instead of H/D sex, huh? Please! And the , i don't know what it's called, dream? illusion? hallucination? anyway, the massage was good, tehe and that he'd tripped was even better. *chuckle*

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