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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!! now draco can finally get past harry's self denial...heheeh.. well, im hoping at least. finally they have someone else on their side.. i quite like Lila. anyway, update soon~
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! My only complaint was that it wasn
person McAbacus
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He wants you Harry! He does! I hope next chapter we see team persuasion Draco as you do so well. I so want Harry to believe just a little bit that Draco is genuinly interested. And I punched the air when Lila was persuaded. Victory (of sorts)!
person Kaspjo
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok ok, So Draco can rape someone's mind. I concede, geez. Show off.
person Myra
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Niceee. Lila knew the truth now, this is GREAT. I'm so glad they have a new ally. I'm happy for Harry! And and, I wonder what Draco will do/say to Harry? XD. Definitely can't wait for the next one. :)
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 10! I hope this plan works? Will Lila help them?
person Dezra
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice cliff hanger. Intriguing story. What is their plan? I hope that Snape comes back to the wizarding world at least for the rest of the story.
person Myra
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm .. interesting chapter. Hahaa, can't imagine Harry acting like Draco. Should be fun, afterall he might never get the same chance again. ;D I really liked it when Draco said "Only Harry". Such great words came from Draco, and sweet too. Oh and serves that superior-attitude auror right. But I wonder if Lila might ever side with Harry and Draco (she really hates Dark Magic right?) .. but I can't really see that happening, at least not until they break the curse. I dunno .. you're full of surprises, I can't help but guessing.. well try to anyways, lol. Wonder what Harry (and Draco) plans to do to her, though. Probably trying to get the Harry Potter file? I really liked the whole idea of Snape being away and all. And he helped Harry <3 (well technically he was helping Draco, but yeah, one way or another).. Snape can really be a great ally in the future, who knows. I wonder if Snape would be able to break the curse too? I mean afterall he's one of the most accomplished Occlumens, and a powerful Legilimens. It'd be great, though, if he could. Great chapter as usual! :)
person Myra
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! My review was cut short again. So continue: And he helped Harry (well technically he was helping Draco, but yeah, one way or another).. Snape can really be a great ally in the future, who knows. I wonder if Snape would be able to break the curse too? I mean afterall he's one of the most accomplished Occlumens, and a powerful Legilimens. It'd be great, though, if he could. Great chapter as usual! :)
person Nice Non Linear
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry really pulled off his Draco Malfoy disguise. How cute, his learning the mannerisms, character, and walk!

I loved Draco's explaination of Harry's fame, symbolism, and the reason people hold in high regard. It was a good and easy to understand breakdown. I think this is the first time I've seen such a full explaination in a fan fiction while also making concessions that 'though maybe it shouldn't be this way--it is'.

"Do you understand? You have to deal with the gap they see between you and the rest, whether or not it

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