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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

person graballz
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god oh my god oh my god I LOVE this story SOOOOO much! I feel really bad that I can't sign on to review as much as I used to (with Reckless), but when I get the chance to come on here, I scan the lists searching for this fic.

*squeal* They're slowly getting better with each other!!! I love that you are developing the characters so much and showing HOW much pain Harry has been in and how difficult it is for him to trust! Me, I think I trust too easily (or at least, superficial trusting...) so this is really interesting for me to see how someone who HAS no trust reacts, thinks, feels, etc.

And this is SUCH an original plotline...I can't WAIT to find out who cast the Cassandra Curse and watch them PAY for it dearly!!!!! MWA hahahaha No one messes with my Draco's Harry! lol You can split this up into as many sequels as you want...I may not have as much time as I used to, but I stick around as much as I can to find out what happens!

This is SO great! I love your writing; I hope you know that!
person Kaspjo
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I like when Harry kicks ass, but why is it that Draco never gets to?

I'll hate you forever until you give Draco a decent scene where he can show his strong side.
person ravenshadow
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The plot is fantastic! The discriptive language paints vivid imagry and the characters are well developed. I look forward to the next instalment with glee.
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What did Kingsley realy want? I can't imagin him as Harry's oponent.
They should question him and decide afterwards what to do.
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7! How did Kingsley know?
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry is realy having big issues
T_T
person acr1228
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! And you frequent updating has me SO SPOILED!!

Have you read "Learning Life Over"? http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600007617

It's got a similar Harry/Draco dynamic as your stories. If you haven't, give it a try. it's wonderful.
person Myra
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This chapter took my breath away! You describe the situation between them very in detail, it's awesome! XD I'm sooo glad Harry's relaxed a bit. And Draco! Ha! Always the Slytherin, lol. Not that I expect any less XD.. great chapter <3
person Extraho
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet. draco really is a top lass manipulator and im glad he realises thathe wants more from harry than sex
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please keep going. i'm dying to find out who did this

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