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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

person Myra
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21: Ahhhhhh! Oh my god! Finally, I'm soooo happy for Harry. I'm glad that Harry and Lila managed to stop Draco, I don't want him to use any extreme Dark Arts either, it would definitely taint his soul. Draco was so sweet!! They're soo lucky to have each other. -goes crazy- I was laughing at how scared Scrimgeour was when Draco threatened him.. loved what you did you him. It's cool that they have someone strict like Lila as their alley, she's a lot of help, and maybe could become one of their friends in the future.. XD Anyways. Wow, Harry's finally allowing Draco. Yaaaaaaay!
person Myra
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22: Smexy! That was so effin hot! And lmao, I laughed hard when Harry told Draco he was slanted. It was just something Harry would say. That said.. chapter 23 next! :]
person Myra
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23: Ginny was great, honestly speaking. I liked her so much in this chapter :) Matured and all, and it's good that even Draco could admit that one small thing. I'm glad that Hermione, Ron and Harry will work on their friendships in the future. It'll take time, but that doesn't matter, I think. They have all the time the world could give. Possessive Draco is hot, as usual. :) ... now to chapter 24. THE last chapter.
person Myra
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24: Oh my god! It had come to an end. -shocked- Wow, I'm feeling a bit of nostalgia here, lol! The first time I read The Frames of Mind series. I feel sad and happy at the same time, haha. That was Perfect with a capital P! Loved it sooooooo much. I loved every single chapters. I loved Harry and Draco's understandings for each other. This one was a one hell of a story! I'm SO GLAD I found an author like you. If not, I'd totally be missing some awesome and top favourite fanfictions. -grins-

Lol, I was shocked few hours back when I noticed A Determined Frame of Mind was completed. I was like OOHHH! XD My computer's been down lately and my laptop was with my dad. So yeah. But I had fun reading all seven chapters in one go. I think I started at 5.30 in the morning! XD And now it's like 9.40am. Of course I took a break somewhere in the middle just now, hehe. Good read, of course. Basically that's it! Keep up the awesome work, I'll totally be looking forward to read all your other stories now, be in long ones or the oneshots. I'm up for all! Hehe. Thank you for writing such magnificent work of arts, you're simply brilliant! :)
person Dezra
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Draco's possessiveness. Are we going to find out how the rest of the world reacts to finding out that Harry was telling the truth?
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I can't wait for the others to come running back! Hope Harry tells them to turn around and keep walking! Sooo need chapter 23!
person McAbacus
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the double dosage while I can thank you very much!! This was all the wonderful things a scene like that should be; discovery, pleasure, trust. And what I really enjoyed was the moments of bickering during and after, it made me chuckle. In-character *and* funny *and* sexy.... 0_o

schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slanted! I love that! I always say be with who you need to be with and to hell with the labels!

An ecellent chapter! I'll be sorry to see the story end.
person Extraho
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn, you were really in a hurry to get thise last chapter out werent you. loved it as always.
person silks
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to leave a enormous review after this... because this doesn't require it. The only thing I wanted to tell you, as a reader, is that I thank you with all of my heart, for writing this wonderful story and letting us read it. There really are few fictions asgood as this one.So, thank you, for being a awesome writer, a better plotter and a wonderful descriptionist. For being there with us and updating regularly, for not letting this die out,for finishing this and for simply writing it altogether.
And I hope I'm speaking for all of those that stayed with you untill the ends. Thank you!

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