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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7! Draco knows something. I wonder if it has to do with Harry and that's why he won't fess up!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a very interesting idea here and your execution of the storyline itself is good so far. BUT I'd strongly recommend getting a beta, I notice that Draco_Harry_lover offered to help. I'd recommend taking her up on her offer, or looking for someone else. There are a lot of parts of the story that just leave me feeling so confused. There are some sentences that are on the verge of incoherent. But I think with a beta's help you could improve these issues. So I'd STRONGLY recommend finding one to help out.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will we find out who the other daddy is soon?
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going insane!!! I can't wait to know what's going on, what are all the secrets? pleaseeeee update soon, the story is great!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tooo bad Harry didn't keep a journal. What is everyone hiding? Sooo need chapter 6!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story and look forward to the next chapters.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is going on? Soooo need chapter 5!!!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco's behavior makes me think he knows something about how Harry got pregnant. He an Harry had sex and Harry can't remember or he knows who raped Harry. I normally don't condone abortion, but I don't think I would want a child from a rape and Harry isn't sure if the rapist is Voldy or not(if he was raped). If the baby is Draco's he will want to speak up before Harry decides.