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*smirk* And just what is Draco up to?

Are you going to add another chappie? If so, e-mail me, yes? kaidachan_@hotmail.com

Who needs plot, especially when the smut is of good quality?! You see a lot of PWP that makes you cringe and stop reading; this, however, is wonderful. The description isn't tacky or vulgar, the language isn't foul or offensive and you're leading the reader into the action with some rather "steamy" (shower, hot water, steam - get it?) scenes. The only thing I want to know is their ages in this fic? I'm not a fan of minor-minor interaction, I'd like to hope they are of age; or at least won't go much further than mutual masturbation if they aren't.

wow more!!!!!!!:)XD

Nice shows they gave each other. Will we get touching soon?

Oh continue!

I don't care if there was no plot, you still need to continue this. I want to know what happens with Draco and Harry, and why Draco was waiting on him outside the locker room. I am sure I am not the only one thinking this. Keep up the great work and please, please, please write more to this.
Kat

this was done awhile ago by someone else exactly the same way everything about it...if u where the original then i know there's more to it if not then u'd best find out who it was i believeit was this "Untitled (Author- recgoddess" please check if ur not her/him

True, there was no plot, but DAMN! That was some story :D

You stayed true to your word. There was absolutely no plot in that what's so ever. But it could be the start to a beautiful story. Not any store, a Harry/Draco story. And not just any Harry/Draco story, one that is blindingly beautiful and erotic with no plot in sight. I enjoyed that, even though it was a little short. It was quick, and to the point. All the best PWPs are. You did a great job. If there were any errors, hell if I caught them. Great piece of work with two great pieces of ass. I look forward to more.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole