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by SickPuppy

person anniea
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i guess that i am evil, i'll admit it, i just hope a bolt of lightning doesn't strike me down. another fantabulous chapter i must say. but i can't hhhhhhhheeeeelllllppppp it, i just llllooovvve long words. update soon *kisses*
person alma
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person HarryVik
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just please stoooopppppp with theeeeee long outdragggggged words. It's really irritating.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Wait a minute ... that didn't seem like it was Harry and Sev. It seemed more like it was Draco ... and .... who?? LUCIUS???? Cause 'the boy' said he'd belonged to the man 'all his life' and he'd been having sex with him for a looooong time previous, so .... Could that be the secret????

*would really hate to think it's just her own twisted imagination at work here -- not that it would be surprising if that were the case*

Okay, so maybe I'm just a sick perv, but that's what I came up with after reading CH 21. If it was supposed to be Harry and Sev, then I'm mystified - perhaps a past life regression? It could explain away all the things that made me think it wasn't them.

Loved all the updates, BTW.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow SP! Great update! please add more
person anniea
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhittttttttttttt hotness. update when you can sweetie *kisses*
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, so my friend Rikku (who reads your story, too, BTW, she just doesn't bother getting an AFF account so she can review) says she doesn't think it's Draco and Lucius because you would have put an 'inc' warning in the fic summary - so I guess I am wrong. (Though, how could it be a shocking twist if you warn us about it, right? And maybe Draco isn't Lucius's son at all? Oh the possibilities ....) And neither of us can think of who else Draco might be with. *pouts*

But it has to be something beyond the regular Harry/Sev if it is them, right? Are these their past reincarnations that Harry dreams about? Am I just overthinking this?? Was it all just an excuse for smut? (not that I'm complaining) Oh, and Rikku says your fic kicks ass!

I figured I could review more than once for the same chapter since I missed my chances to review the past two times before this ^_^

~Rinnie~
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just too funny! As soon as I come back from reviewing, all dejected because I thought I was wrong, here you update and tell me I was right!!

Take that, Rikku! Ha!

*settles down* Yes, I can see why Draco would definitely want to keep that a secret. But is that all there is to the secret? Or is there more? Hmmmm ...

And yay! Harry in love! So sweet! And I like how he keeps tripping over Severus's name the way he does. It's cute and slightly mischievous.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Way to go SP! Great chapter! Please add more soon!
person alma
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.

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