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Jen618 and Lil I do thank you for you opinion on this story. I feel I should explain a few things and then add more to my warning at the beginning of this story. I wrote fic very quickly for a challenge. I did have to follow a few guide line. Yes I could have made this a chapter story and drawn out everything, but I didn't want too. I wanted this quick. I may in the furture redo this story and add some "Pre" chapters and explain why the characters are doing the things that they are doing. I knew not everyone would like it, I almost didn't post it on this site because I knew it would get this reaction. I think next time I will trust my gut. I did state that Severus and Hermione both had secret crushes on each other, I don't remember every stating that they love each other, but I guess it could have come across that way. I again do thank you for your opinion, most people just flame and never explain what made them hate it.

My main issue is a 50 yr old man sounding having a "crush" and sounding like he's blushing; and the "love" bit, when they haven't even dated. Even though this is sweet, I guess I got a bit frustrated cause I felt that you could have made this really interesting. I tend to only say that when I like someone's writing.

WOW and on my birthday too. Thank you, I loved it.

Lovely how they got together here. And Draco, well it would serve him right if she spoke all week in great detail of her weekend. One thing, I believe you meant to say "her still-quaking body" instead of "her still quacking body" -- otherwise you might need a beastiality warning on the story. :)

MsBentleySnape- LOL Thanks for the catch. I can't believe that both me and my beta missed that :)

loony_old_fan-Happy Birthday I'm glad that you liked the story :)

piggylicious-Thanks you so much for your review. I'm glad that you luv the story :)