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It really seems there are more of Harry that we will learn later, what more secrets do Harry hold?

(Chapters 1, 2, 3)

I've just found this story and read all three chapters in one go. This story is very well written, the characterisation of Harry as the patient teacher is a nice one, as is Lucius', the benevolent (so it seems) benefactor and concerned father. Draco...at this moment, it's love/hate. His snottiness, petulance, disrespect for others, disdain for anyone or anything other than himself are all well written representations of a spoiled child. He's very immature for his age, and his anger and unreasonable rage, while also well written, are a little tiresome and hard to swallow at times. You've made him a thoroughly disagreeable brat, who is in desperate need of a good old fashioned thrashing, which I keep hoping either Lucius or Harry will administer! Having said that, I think this story is very good, original, and I like the (for the most part) non-magic aspect. I also like it that you've incorporated some of the other Potterverse characters; Lavender as a housemaid, Seamus as a footman, Rufus Scrimgeour as a sea captain (nice!). Now the plot thickens, and the intrigue is upped by the appearance of Albus and who I assume to be Voldemort. I'm dying to know what makes the books Harry bought so valuable to Voldemort, and what happened to them when his horse ran away.

Great job so far and I'm looking forward to your next update. Please add me to your update alert list: jillianetpr@yahoo.com


(And, for what it's worth, when Harry and Draco do finally get up to something, I hope it's Harry who tops. Since he's the teacher and Draco is the spoiled brat, it just seems right. Draco on top would seem like too much of a control issue, he would top because he would think it his right. It is, however, your story.)

I remember this story from back when you posted the first chapter. I remember thinking, its such a good story beginning, but I might go made because there's just the one chapter! So i'm really glad to see that you've updated again. I like the way that you brought out the Malfoy/Potter rivalry, but have toned it down, and put it on an intellectual level. You write a good Draco, very 'upward pointed nose' and a sort of pretentiously charming way of dressing and behaving.
I would like to be notified of updates.
My email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

First off, I'd like to state my happiness that you have not fallen off the face of the earth and that you have decided to continue Teach Me.

Secondly, thank you very muchly for writing such a great chapter. I love how unsure yet determined both young men are, and goodness what an inventive and unique way to introduce the villain. I was so pleased when I first stumbled upon the story, and even more so now that it's shaping up to be rife with intrigue and fantastic characters.

Kudos to your writing style and character development, but most of all your dialogues!

omg u updated!! I found this story a while ago but thought u weren't go to update, so u've made me soooo happy cos I totally love it^^ can't wait for the next chapter, poor Draco!!
can u please add me to your update list, please? is dragondemalafe@hotmail.com =)

So far, love where your taking this story! Also love the build up of Harry and Draco's relationship! Though I see that in this story Voldemort is going to be a thorn in Harry's arse as he is in the actual books ^_~

Please update chapter 4 soon!

Jan ^_^

And if possible please email me when you've updated ^_^
naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com

I just started reading your story, and I really enjoy is so far. The story is quite refreshing and intriguing. It's also quite amusing with the way Draco acts. lol. He really does act like a spoiled brat. Keep up the good work, can't wait for your next chapter.

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn! Poor poor Draco! He's falling in love with Harry!

weeeee, finally a update! ^^ Draco is so cute when he is in a jealous rage! hihi pleeeease keep updating, I really like where this is going! *

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