rate_review Reviews

Yay! Update soon! (sorry for the pointless review)

good story

First, hold true to your story. Writing the story, the way you did, certainly shows the passion, forethought, and love that you put forth. It was not boring. If by boring you mean it did not have smut, I have no doubt that will come later. Though I can not speak for others, but it is rather refreshing to have a story with a plot that is not always smut. If you need reference, look at Slashpervert and the 1-5 stories, WeaslyWench for that matter and there are so many others on this site that do so.

When you read these reviews really listen to what they say, and let it build your confidence. I don't think people on this site bash or give rude comments to one's story. Those that read it and view are earnest in what they say.

Your story has me enthralled and I wish to read more. Do they not say, the first line captures the readers interest, my dear you did so. For me, I had the visual that you projected while I was reading, thus adding to the enthrallment.

With that being said, I encourage you to write more chapters.

I can't wait for more! Love it :)

Hmmm....what will Lucius see? I like it. More, please!

It was good! I enjoyed reading it ^^
I really hope you update soon...

continue

Not boring at all I like the premise I can actually feel what Harry felt about his plight and what he felt when he saw Draco. Can't wait for more.

oh wow! i like where this is going! and no its not boring!! please update Soon! *hugs and kisses*

good start, very interesting.