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NOOOOOO! OMG Update soon please! This fic is sooo good!!

This story is very literate to say the least; a masterpiece in the smallest form. I would have to say though that your love for commas certainly shows. I have nothing bad to say about this story. I'm very entraced by the vocabulary and the way you go about describing intense situations as well as the character's emotions. The first scene between Harry and Snape was very well written. I only have one critical review in relation to the grammar of the story. While you use the sentence structure very easily and most times, very well, I will have to say that you do tend to use commas where they are not needed, and you use broken sentences. You can choose whether or not to take that to heart. Don't get me wrong, I love the way you write; I am no "writer" or "editor" when it comes to writing stories, but that's just a little help from my end; it's something that I learned in the years that I was taking college English. I can't wait to read the next chaper of this story. It has become a very dear one to me.

Your faithful reader,
Bree

My God but you know how to play with someones hormones! This is so incredibly Hot! I love Dominant scary Sev as long as it is consentual or at least a bit of dubious con. I love this story cannot wait for more!

oh my god! i am going to wet myself! please update again. i love the way you write snape!

OMG...this is so effing hot. The desperation, the helplessness, Snape's wicked, domineering desire...*fans self*. MORE, please?

read it one sitting! very good...love it.

read it one sitting! very good...love it.

Cool *thumbs up* Update soon!

to end there is cruel! i look forward to the next chapter, or i will once my heart stops racing!

ohohoh, every new chatper is just too short Q_Q give us more!