rate_review Reviews

This story is rather well written, and given the changes from canon, feels ‘right’.  Character actions and reactions fit the established personalities, and the dialogue fits the characters and reads smooth and natural, which is hard to do.  In short, it’s much better than a lot of AFF you find here or other similar sites.  How do I know?  As soon as I finished it, I wanted more!  This story begs for another chapter or two, if they exist but are posted elsewhere, please let me know.  Either way, keep writing!