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for A Budding Rose

by Sultana

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In reference to your A/N: I have read a few post HBP 'marriage law' stories where the managing of the problem of the reduced magical births was all-inclusive; everyone had to pitch in. Any unmarried purebloods, within a given age range, were to marry the half bloods and the muggleborns and in reverse, the muggleborns had to marry the purebloods and the half bloods, and the half bloods could marry from either group. Nevertheless, they had to marry and reproduce. This way it allowed for Severus' blood status to be half and yet still be required to save our lady faire to keep her from those horrid Death Eaters. Naturally, she could not marry the idiot Weasley because we are SS/HG shippers.

Voldemort was using the purebloods to gain the position of power he wanted. I do not think he truly cared about the blood status of his Death Eaters; power was all he wanted. Moreover, since he spouted Pureblood superiority, the magical world seems to have assumed he, too, was pureblood. It ends up as ironic that all the Pureblood Supremacists were backing a half blood.

Now, onto the one little problem I noted in your first chapters. You keep putting a period at the end of the title Miss. You forced me into a bit of research to make sure and at Wikipedia it says that Mr. has a period, Mrs. has a period, but Miss does not. Ms. does, but not Miss. [Unless it is at the end of a sentence.]

BTW, could tell within a few paragraphs of the first chapter that I was going to like your story. Great writing.
person kalderas
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! what a question, it is understandable though. but speaking like he wasnt there, hahah! longer chapters please, it seems like the chapters are only minutes long in characters time.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEY!
Simply WONDERFUL!! I love how you make Hermione react and I looove Snape.Looking forward to see the UPDATE!!
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um, I hope so! she kinda fancies him already and it's Snape so it wouldn't be too difficult! I can't wait to see the reactions of Harry and Ron and everyone else

looking forward to more
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me likey! me need more! ..."you fainted like a ninny" LOL!
person Extraho
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so typical for a homonial teenaged mind, buti dont thhink she'll really mind sleeping with him though (?)
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting first chapter. I am intrigued and would love to read more so update again soon. Ron/Hermione pairings makes my skin crawl so I truly enjoyed Hermiones comment about books being more interesting (even if she regretted them later on). Update soon!!!!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this looks good. post next chapter soon please
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Please update soon is geting good.

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