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this was very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye

Ch. 14 Boy, that was close. I'm just glad that Harry's learned to be a better liar. But it seems the cops are really suspicious of him. I wonder why they didn't just tell the truth: that he'd just had terrific sex with his boyfriend. I'm sure that would have sent them scurrying. ;D

very very very good story keep going and post soon
bye bye

Ch. 13 Hmm, that went better than expected. I don't think Mark should let himself be intimidated by Draco, though. It's not a good idea to give such a man a feeling of advantage. If he'd mentioned milk to me, I would have just raised my eyebrow and said, "Good to know you're stocked up." Heh. The sex was really hot too. ;D

Sooo need chapter 14!

but what happens when mark is attacked by D.E. and has the info extracted from him, sorry i'm being pessimistic. love4 how well he took it. update soon *kisses*

Ch. 12 Goodness, that was frightening! I had expected Harry to be a victim somehow. But he was always a fighter; he probably wouldn't have succumbed so easily. The attack has altered matters greatly. It's startling to have Mark drawn into their world but I suppose it was inevitable given his attraction to Harry; it's just happened sooner than expected.

However, that definitely makes Mark a weak link. If Death Eaters come looking for Harry and Draco, Mark could be in danger or he might give away the secret without meaning to do so. Still, this might show Mark, more than anything else, that Draco and Harry belong together and to each other.

I'm waiting to see how Draco will react when he wakes up and sees Mark there.

Sooo need chapter 13! Mark helped them and Harry used magic! I hope this doesn't backfire on them! Those men knew tooo much about Draco. How?

Ch. 11 Whew! For awhile I was terrified that David would revert to punishing Harlan again for coming back late. But it seems that there was no need to worry about it. It does seem as if opening up to is making them more capable of dealing with their problems without resorting to violence. I'm looking forward to seeing that date. :)

Soooo need chapter 12! Harry should have told him about the kiss. Mark can throw that up at Draco!