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I really love this story. But I'm getting a bit confused. Harry seems to have more Power now, since he healed Draco. What happened with all the spells? It's not that I like seeing Harry being tortured, but it suddenly changed everything.
Would you minid explaining a bit more in this matter?

For example, when Harry topped Mark I defenitly expected the collar to cause pain. Even IF Draco allowed this action. BUt I don't think that Voldemort would ever agree to that and HE made the collar and all the spells to torture Harry not to give him fun.
That he's having fun with Draco ok, they love each other and Draco is somehow Harry's Master because of the spells.
But all these things got so much into the background.
Please don't lose it.

Scar

Ch. 22 Another passionate and tender chapter. Draco's introspection afterwards when he thinks about the possibilities of the world was unexpected but very welcome. Perhaps it's not the world that's changed so much as he has.

I loved the quote at the end! I love that song and it fits their lives and relationship so well! Good chapter!

this was very very very god chapter
i really like it
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Ch. 21 Goshums. That was...beyond hot. I've only written one story with a threesome and it wasn't as good as this. Dang, I need more practice...with the writing, I mean. :P~ ~ ~ ~

Soooo need chapter 22!!!

nice

I am sensing something is about to happen here and soon. I just don't want there to be tragic and misery....*sigh* But that makes for good reading!

You're going to kill Harry or Draco, aren't you? D: I just realised that you have Character Death in your spoilers (but not with the D/H live you have for your other stories...) *bawls*
So I'm guessing that one of them ends up with Mark, then. Perhaps Draco? xD There's something poetic about that. The man who brought them together dies. ;-;

I hope I'm wrong. I want both of them to live. D: I guess I'll just have to see...

Oh wow is Harry/Harlan ever sexy taking the lead in this chapter.Aren't they just horny little devils and so uninhibited too! As always, I love reading your stories!