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You sooo blew me away! I sooo need chapter 21!

Awww, just when it was getting good... oh the waiting and waiting. I am so like harry. Impatient.

I love a semi jealous Draco also. Those conflicting emotions felt true. It is unfortunate he is unwilling to show Harry the same pleasures of topping that he gets. That's relationships though--straight, gay, or whatever. It is hard for both parties to give up a little trust, control and vulnerability. It'd be interesting to see what would happen if Harry wanted to top more after this session with Mark. What would that do to their relationship.

very very very god chapter
i really liked it a lot
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Thanks for the cliifie, you sadist bastard! LOL! Love ya'

Ch. 20 Oh my. Sex is somehow always more intimate when personal feelings come into play. I hope they can get along after this. But I wanted Mark to finish that picture! :P

I kinda wanted more of the nude painting first before all the action happened... you know, suspense. But whatever. Good chapter.
update

Okay, I LOOOOOVED Shooting Star. I've only read a couple of chapters of this story but the Harlen/David thing bothers me. I understand they they had to change names and if they only called each other that (along with others of course) then I could live with that. But I would think you would have still described them with Draco/Harry. For example, Harry and Draco walked down the street, "What would you like for dinner David?" Harry asked. "I'm not sure Harlen but that place looks good." Draco said pointing to a restraunt across the street. I don't think it would confuse people and I honestly think you would have a lot more readers for the sequel. But it's your story and other than that little thing I love it.

Draco is a selfish bastard, isn't he? D:
If I were Harry I'd sleep with Mark simply out of spite (which is why I'm awful at relationships xD).
But seriously, Harry needs to grow a backbone. o.o Sex isn't only to be had how and when Draco wants it. >_>

HEY
THIS WAS VERY VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE