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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness I love this story. Seriously they're the cutest couple. Can't wait for more!
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just found your story and read all 18 chapters right now...i love it and i can't wait for 19...
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Please add more soon!
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I liked how Lucius was jealous of "COSMO". At least that shows that Hermione is truly his. I can't wait to read more.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I can't believe how bold Hermione is being with her husband. I can't wait to read more. I hope that there are more chapters with Severus in them because I fully enjoyed how he and Lucius acted during their weekend together. please update again soon.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius + MacDonald's = does not compute! Reboot! Reboot!
I will admit that I think Lucius is a bit OOC in this, but not glaringly so. Besides, I can't say for certain if he truly IS OOC, since we don't learn much about him as a character. I AM glad that you don't have him as the typical "omfg she's mugglebornzorz, must avoid and/or torture!" It gets old. I also LOVE the way you update so often, but aren't plagued with bad plot, grammar errors, or two-paragraph chapters.
I will admit that I think Lucius is a bit OOC in this, but not glaringly so. Besides, I can't say for certain if he truly IS OOC, since we don't learn much about him as a character. I AM glad that you don't have him as the typical "omfg she's mugglebornzorz, must avoid and/or torture!" It gets old. I also LOVE the way you update so often, but aren't plagued with bad plot, grammar errors, or two-paragraph chapters.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: I
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14: You describe scenes so well. I