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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Re: Chapters 5-8
My first thoughts were that you are so good at being a tease it isn't funny. But now that the "relationship" is slowly progressing, I don't really need to say that now... too late.
For the next story you are writing, can I suggest trying to find other forms of expression, because it is becoming a little repetitive. Just a thought. But I am enjoying this very much.
My first thoughts were that you are so good at being a tease it isn't funny. But now that the "relationship" is slowly progressing, I don't really need to say that now... too late.
For the next story you are writing, can I suggest trying to find other forms of expression, because it is becoming a little repetitive. Just a thought. But I am enjoying this very much.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The punishment to the brothers were not enough in my opinion, but truthful to the way Harry would serve it. Nicely done!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Please let Draco be okay. Please let Draco be okay" (she whispers as a mantra). Nearly at the end now, don't go and spoil it by killing him off.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW was that great!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* Poor Draco! that was horrible! Nice update! Please update again!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor draco must feel terrible :(
need more
need more
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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I hope that fucker bleeds to death and rots on the kitchen floor.
I hope that fucker bleeds to death and rots on the kitchen floor.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no!!! poor draco!!! :(
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG?(cries)!!! I already knew death eaters were going to have Draco but I did not expect that. I'm so sad right now! I need the last 2 chapters. I hope Draco recovers ok and they can move on from this disaster.