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for Beauxbatons' Boy

by JLynnTheJewel

schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's just soo cute. Continue
person hpn827
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry finding out the person he's lusting after is a boy is hilarious.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've obviously struck a chord with people, and not just a few. Never underestimate the appeal of a well-beta'd fic with an original twist and an adorable cute/horny Draco ;-)

I do enjoy a flustered!Harry, especially in denial over his painfully obvious crush ;-) Soooo cute. Like snack food for the soul :-) Now you've answered a few questions, and peeled away a little layer of mystery. Beauxbatons allows boys...but very few ever go there. Good enough...particularly since it places a cute carefree Draco withing eyeball distance of a confused/excited Harry. How ticklish!

Now we can look forward to their first exhcange of words :-) By way of serious review, a few of the sentences still reach for a flow that doesn't quite come. Kind of breathless and frantic. Been there too, myself. I try to shift my state of mind when I edit. I don't just look for errors each time. On my first edit, I always read it just like a reader would. No hunting for errors, just 'feeling the flow' and rolling with it. I do the grammatical stuff after changing sentences as I please.

That said, this fic is deservedly well reviewd, and really fun :-) Looking forward to the next! Lurve, Samayel
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOve the chapter cant wait for the next one.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like it. I like it. ... so how often was it you wanted to update?
person rosiel
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story sounds fabulous so far. please update soon
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it. Harry helped Draco up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3! Who pushed him? Why did he pass out?
person windbell
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^ ^ I'm very very happy!!
Update Please~!!!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more!!!!

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