Hi ReiRei,
Firstly I love your stories, long with intricate plots.
Two small things I have noticed, in chapter 5 I think it is (starts with the line about Hermione being cursed with easy tears) it says laboratory rather then lavatory and in chapter 7 when describing outfits for Lilly to wear to Hogsmeade you describe her hair as Titan (a form of giant) when I think you meant titian (based off a painter who loved painting red headed women)
Can't wait for the newest story to be done.
Thanks for the effort and time that goes into something that has provided me with much entertainment.
~Mia