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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know it's a while since you wrote this, but I have just found it and spent the whole of my Saturday reading it from start to finish.
I forgot the ironing, was late making dinner and even forgot to get coffee..... It was riveting from the start and I totally loved it.
Thank you!
I forgot the ironing, was late making dinner and even forgot to get coffee..... It was riveting from the start and I totally loved it.
Thank you!
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Re: chapter two
*SQUEE* Mmm, mmm, mmm, such a lovely, sexy, yummy kiss--lucky girl!
*SQUEE* Mmm, mmm, mmm, such a lovely, sexy, yummy kiss--lucky girl!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Found your story in SoftObsidian74's reading list. Promising start. I'll bookmark this story and will happily read more tomorrow! :o)
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an exciting look at HP fic.
You gave us it all. Time turner. Generations: Marauders, HP/HG, new offspring. even dealt with werewolves.
The only thing you missed was the Weasleys (I really like them). Not too shabby.
If you ever go back and tighten up this story, look to the area where Hermione comes back to Hogwarts. There is a lot of detail there that takes away from your story. Also, what gives Harry the right to take 3 years away from Snape by leaving him in a coma? There is something bad guy-ish about that.
You gave us it all. Time turner. Generations: Marauders, HP/HG, new offspring. even dealt with werewolves.
The only thing you missed was the Weasleys (I really like them). Not too shabby.
If you ever go back and tighten up this story, look to the area where Hermione comes back to Hogwarts. There is a lot of detail there that takes away from your story. Also, what gives Harry the right to take 3 years away from Snape by leaving him in a coma? There is something bad guy-ish about that.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Read it from beginning to end in the past 3 days and I must say that I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!
Brava my dear. It was awesome.
Brava my dear. It was awesome.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I just stumbled upon your story today and I ended up glued to my computer for the next 3 hours reading it all the way through because it was so addicting. It was amazing and I love how you made the plot so intricate! I kept thinking that I had everything figured out and then you threw something else in. Normally I don't like young-Snape stories but the way you developed his character and refused to turn him into a softie really made the story. So, I just wanted to say what a wonderful story it was and I hope you post more (maybe a sequel or one-shot that focuses on Cissy and Damian or one that focuses on Draco and Anise's life prior to the epilogue?)! Thanks for writing the story!!!!
I just stumbled upon your story today and I ended up glued to my computer for the next 3 hours reading it all the way through because it was so addicting. It was amazing and I love how you made the plot so intricate! I kept thinking that I had everything figured out and then you threw something else in. Normally I don't like young-Snape stories but the way you developed his character and refused to turn him into a softie really made the story. So, I just wanted to say what a wonderful story it was and I hope you post more (maybe a sequel or one-shot that focuses on Cissy and Damian or one that focuses on Draco and Anise's life prior to the epilogue?)! Thanks for writing the story!!!!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great story, I love time turner epics and this was an epic. It was always Hermione, not Lily, I could not accept that He did it all for Lily.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fic!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So AFF wouldn't let me post my final review until today because I "exceeded my limits on posting" for this story yesterday...lol. Anyway....
I'm so glad you didn't kill Draco...I kinda knew in the back of my head that he would live because we both love him so much but I wasn't sure if you had a dark side and was going for a tragedy. I'm really happy that he and Anise got together too. Once again, I hate that I wasn't blessed with the talent to draw because I have some fantastic visual images of how they would look together by the lake that would be great for this story. So Draco is Harry's son-in-law...bizarre and funny! Even though I usually can't stand Snape and Hermione pairings..I'll admit this story made them believable and sexy so kudos to you for pulling that off from a nonbeliever..I like young Snape better but your depictions of him young made him with Hermione more plausible once he aged. Where was he in the Epilogue anyway? I don't remember him being in it...Too old to come out on the platform? lol.
Damian sounds hot...I'd like to see a follow up with him and Narcissa who has to be absolutely gorgeous with parents like that. Anyway, I don't want to blow smoke up your ass but again, this plot was complicated but you managed to make it flow and make it easy to follow for people like me who can't usually do the time travel thing. I hope you're pimping it out other sites to get it more exposure...don't be shy about nominating yourself for fan fic competitions with it either, if one comes around that appropiate for the type of story and pairings, I definitely will.
OK Rei, thanks for sharing this with me...you've gotten to break out of my Draco/Hermione, threesome, and Harry/Draco routine and see that other fics may be worth checking out. See you around the board.
Til your next update or my next review.....
Night Night : )
I'm so glad you didn't kill Draco...I kinda knew in the back of my head that he would live because we both love him so much but I wasn't sure if you had a dark side and was going for a tragedy. I'm really happy that he and Anise got together too. Once again, I hate that I wasn't blessed with the talent to draw because I have some fantastic visual images of how they would look together by the lake that would be great for this story. So Draco is Harry's son-in-law...bizarre and funny! Even though I usually can't stand Snape and Hermione pairings..I'll admit this story made them believable and sexy so kudos to you for pulling that off from a nonbeliever..I like young Snape better but your depictions of him young made him with Hermione more plausible once he aged. Where was he in the Epilogue anyway? I don't remember him being in it...Too old to come out on the platform? lol.
Damian sounds hot...I'd like to see a follow up with him and Narcissa who has to be absolutely gorgeous with parents like that. Anyway, I don't want to blow smoke up your ass but again, this plot was complicated but you managed to make it flow and make it easy to follow for people like me who can't usually do the time travel thing. I hope you're pimping it out other sites to get it more exposure...don't be shy about nominating yourself for fan fic competitions with it either, if one comes around that appropiate for the type of story and pairings, I definitely will.
OK Rei, thanks for sharing this with me...you've gotten to break out of my Draco/Hermione, threesome, and Harry/Draco routine and see that other fics may be worth checking out. See you around the board.
Til your next update or my next review.....
Night Night : )