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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are so amazing! The plot is quite intriguing and I love Severus. He is just how I imagined an angsty slytherin being.
Please update more soon!!!
Please update more soon!!!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aak, I must have more! Story is progressing quite well! LOVE SEVERUS!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love it and it is so different from most other stories. I'm totally gripped. Please keep up the good work.
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are writing this so quickly. But it is never enough. Please more.
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are developing this story. Just a little tip regarding your writing style - the only thing that sort of disturbs me is your switching between tenses, often in the middle of a sentence. You should either stick to the past or present tense, alternating like that is disrupting the flow of your writing.
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! I want to more!!! I love this fic!!! Please update as soon as you can, Oh and I'm feeling a lot better today xxxx
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was one quick update!!!!! up they all come that fast!!! Your story is becoming really intriguing and I just can't wait for more!!!xx
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Both excellent updates! (of course!) Absolutely excellent chapters. LOVED THEM!
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter(2) I think I understand your meaning because young Snape just screams Draco, am I right?!!. I need cheering up today, I have been out of work for a while (since losing a baby), and I have to go back on monday....God I hate real life!!! Don't you wish magic was real, then I could marry Draco (who would of course be real) and live happily ever after in Malfoy manor xxx
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you are writing this story. It is unbelieveable how quickly you are putting up chapters I can't wait for more. love where you are taking this story thank you rj